kali'sEyes

casting
the backward glance
where perspective

feels for infinity --
death looks out
unbelongingly

at swollen men
all passing by
restless to be

extinguished in eternity...

 

 

 

Author's Note

writing is never about praise its about discovery and wonder -- watching a simple stream bubbling and meandering, glimmering many Suns is not entertainment but more of a synergy of connectivity and dead forms and rituals like labels of 'entertainment' cannot keep pace with Truth as its revelations are always roiling and writhing Beauties for eyes that see and change for Hearts with wings of why that fly in rhythms rising on thermals of wonder to the farther sky -- that is why the Poet is ever creating destroying sleeping and dreaming himHERself anew -- a neverending process with reality as a placeholder 'til he can engender a new universe out of the bits and pieces of the old one -- in hisHER image

Reviews

[jeRRy.whaLLey]

dead forms and rituals like labels cannot keep pace with Truth as its revelations are always roiling and writhing Beauties for eyes that see and change for Hearts with wings of why that fly in rhythms rising on thermals of wonder to the farther sky --

[Vanessa Whiteley]

Sensational minamalist poem that captures huge a philosophical perspective in just a few words. A poem to start one thinking and hindi goddesses will be playing around the corners of my mind for the next few days.

[Touché Armada]

First, that picture you chose, I cant help but notice such a serine facial expression on a slain face,,,, just an observation.

Then onto your wonderful words, I had the most interesting conversation last night, about conversation and writing and the revelations that occur when immersed in one or the other or both, both personal and perhaps not so personal, a shared two way offering of various revelations if you will.. Sometimes as a writer its good to sit down and read your own work at intervals, because sometimes it is very much plasma as you often put it, a shape shifter.. And sometimes as a writer we ALL have a certain insight we at first may not see, other times we may.. We should write the day sometimes exactly as we would like it to unfold, we should create the happy endings, and we should endeavor to slay the shadows in our minds.. Of coarse we cant always do this, but we should try =D

And we should always always speak our mind, as true to ourselves as we can be, in the softest most gentle tones we can, because someone may be depending on that fact or thought.