Red pool

our imagination and the beauty we can see and create within ourselves should always be shared in any way you can and i chose this way.

some carpels some petals
falling from the sky

with the wind as their carpet
holding them like the angel of love

they fall in a red pool of water
some ripples are born as they touch

comes a vixen with rainbow hair
and wine in her eyes

she splashes some water
on her jubilant face

those fateful drops
die a death wished by the one

looking at the beauty, romancing water
only hoping

if he were a drop
a drop in the red pool

 junaid altaf

Author's Note

some weed bribing me with a good imaginative state and this is a product of that

Reviews

[¿]

Mmm...the end of last stanza was a rare wish....
Creative imaginary you've!!😊

[junaid altaf]

Thanks tahsin

[V]

Interesting images you sort of paint with your words. I somehow came across your profile, nicely written pieces.

[junaid altaf]

Thanks for the review vanessa......

[V]

You're welcome.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Highly descriptive and tasteful, well done, good read.

[junaid altaf]

thanks thomas