"Let not"

A Poem by junaid altaf

we are supreme amongst the creation and the reason is the impeccable thinking machine that has been embedded in each of us,but what we forget is that our human should not come under its influence.

let not the river of your imagination

erode the beauty of your soul

let not the diamond of your intellect

pierce into the human you are

let not the power of your reason

make u challenge the momentum of god

junaid altaf

© 2013 junaid altaf

Author's Note

we are a product of our thoughts , but sometimes we should think as humans!

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Blood Ink Diary

What a reflective and gorgeous poem ! Truly relished on this Spring night. Cheers

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

thanks shaheen

Elina

I quite enjoyed this. Often times, we shamelessly boast our knowledge. Scientists, or any human for that matter, exalt their superior intelligence and think themselves terribly clever. But when one considers the vastness of the heavens and all creation, and sees the glory of God in every little detail, one realizes that all of humanity is actually quite dim.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

well interpreted
thanks for the review

The dark story

this is really thought provoking, words of wisdom are ringing loudly through those diction. a helpful message to human, very much useful in our current scenario. we humans are strong by our imagination, but when it comes to holding our sanity and soul strong, we loose; until we realize it has already become a slave to his own thoughts.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

good interpretation

Sanober

This is a powerful little gem.....a real beautiful message to mankind. We may be the supreme, amazing, intellectual beings .... but oh so fragile. And we must never forget that! Enjoyed this very much, great writing.