"Brush of nature"

i was walking through a crowded area just today........and it felt as if i was touched by the beauty of events around me!..........nature speaks through events.......moving clouds....they stunned me!

The silence persisting in the crowd

the revelation that follows

on the mirror of sky as i look

reflected is a beam of wisdom

existence acting as a companion

the vastness as its shore!

the brush of nature, as if painting

the creation, acting as the wall!

Junaid altaf

Author's Note

well i very much tried to pen down what i felt!

Reviews

[Michael G.]

A very interesting write, sir.
You captured the moment well, in my opinion.
I also read your description of the poem... which I rarely do, by the way. You could almost start your poem with the first two lines there. They would help the reader see what you were seeing. Just my thoughts.
Keep writing.

[junaid altaf]

thank you very much

[Michael G.]

You are most welcome, sir.

[junaid altaf]

please don't humiliate me by calling me sir!

[Michael G.]

It is "Not" an insult.
I am from the South and I was brought up to have good manners. When communicating with someone unknown, the use of sir or ma'am is a way of being proper.
I apologize if you found it confusing or insulting. It was meant to be.

[junaid altaf]

i actually meant to say.............please don't give me too much respect because you are elderly and i m just a kid........and sir it was quite obvious from the review that your upbringing is based on manners........i m sorry for the confusion......

[Michael G.]

As am I. I give anyone respect, regardless of age, to those who warrant respect.

[junaid altaf]

oh thats an honor !

[The dark story]

splendid...i think that nature has inspired us in every way...whether it is to talk about patience or whether it is to talk about solicitude...well nature is a magic in itself!!1

[Pax]

nature is such an inspiring and calming wonders to write...
very nice write!

[junaid altaf]

thanks pax

[Rick Puetter]

This is a very nice poem. I enjoyed it very much. It flows very well and there is no difficulty at any point in feeling or understanding your intent.

Well done.

Very best regards!

Rick

[junaid altaf]

thank you very much rick...........

[Mark]

I do feel that you have described, the awesome feeling that natures shares with us when she is willing, and we are in tune with her. Very nice!

[junaid altaf]

thanks mark