"World's of others"

how often we feel as loosers witnessing the materialistic prosperity of others..........and in the meantime don't notice the blessing at hand!!!!!!!

i may be a speck of dust 

sprinkled over my existence

that infinity of arousals flourishing

the sudden death by the touch of a whisker!

i sometimes feel the blessed me

and frequently in world"s of others

the glamour and luxury i am a spectator of

lines on my hand speak a different tale!

living is not always about achieving 

a gift we already have should be noticed!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Junaid altaf

Author's Note

i would like some valuable responses............

Reviews

[Toni]

I really enjoyed reading this, very nice (:

[junaid altaf]

thanks antonette

[Toni]

You're Welcome :)
Thanks for sharing :)

[junaid altaf]

well i m here to share!

[Toni]

That's good, I can't wait to read more (:

[junaid altaf]

then go through my other writings!

[Toni]

I will! Hehe, it's just taking me a while :P

[junaid altaf]

just go on sweetie....

[Toni]

Okay

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very well written and said

[junaid altaf]

thanks

[Muse]

I know that feeling..living vicariously through the life of others..or always wishing for more. Or being consumed with envy.

Meanwhile...we fail to realize our own blessings. My only critique...get rid of the purple...it cheapens a good write.

[junaid altaf]

thanks for the review