" on the canvas of water"

just sitting by the river side and witnessing the photographic abilities of nature.........water thats life to water as a canvas..........a vivid imagination

The surface of life acting as a canvas

the splendor of creation as its guest

witnessed by the magnificent of all

a view to be magnified by the soul

unaware of the submerged divinity

acting as puppets to its hallucination

what a refreshment to the non-corrosive!

what a gaze for the predators so called

a sudden shock of this realisation

only a blink of the eyes, its time span

i stand as a passerby to its existence

it disappears like a comet in the sky!!!!!!!!!

Junaid altaf

Author's Note

simply!
immersed into the view and then came up with this!!!!!!
would be pleased to hear ur response...........

Reviews

[daydreamer]

Very beautiful. You've captured the beauty that not very many people witness.

[junaid altaf]

thanks for appreciating

[Sami Khalil]

a sudden shock of this realisation

only a blink of the eyes, its time span




i stand as a passerby to its existence

it disappears like a comet in the sky!!!!!!!!!
That is the powerful moment of realization of the beauty of nature and the power of its creator and how He gave it all the artistic qualities and mystery . Like I said before The Lord is the greatest artist of all . We humbly enjoy His creation...
Well penned dear poet...:)

[junaid altaf]

thank u for ur valuable response

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome...

[junaid altaf]

i m tryin to find a career in writing but i know it isnt that easy

[Sami Khalil]

Good luck . You are right . It is hard ...

[junaid altaf]

but hope is my mentor!!!

[Sami Khalil]

Now that is the proper attitude . I hope you will reap the desires of your mind and the needs of your heart...:)

[junaid altaf]

lukin forward to the day when i sit on the throne of words!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

Like a King or president is a servant to the people so do poets should be servant of the words of love and truth...:)

[junaid altaf]

only to put the feel into its exact wordly fabric........the throne will help me..............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

[Sami Khalil]

People or readers have to throne you not impose the self on others ... Ambition is very good but it is the experts or readers who will throne you... :)

[junaid altaf]

so y dont u................ so that i can feel the exhilleration hahahahahaah
and u r quite an expert?