Cold,Cold Cobblestones

Cold,Cold Cobblestones

A Poem by jdwhelan
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The empty walks since the lost of my wife to cancer.

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Walking Alone
Along the cold cold cobblestones
The dark and empty streets
Seem to just repeat
As I keep on walking
Trying to find my peace

And when I see the glare
From the street lamps above
I think about how I miss our love
Now that you`re an angel from above

And as I walk alone
Along the cold cold cobblestones
I hear the whispers in the wind
Telling me what could have been
In a world where I can`t win

These streets are empty now
As I search in vain
For relief from this pain
But the darkness of the night
Makes me feel...so insane

© 2013 jdwhelan


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Ben
Reading this made me feel somber and lonely. The title also really drew me in. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I so can relate to your beautiful words here, I lost someone I loved dearly several years back, I like to think of him as one of the Angels watching me from above, thanks so much for sharing and very much enjoyed xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jdwhelan

11 Years Ago

thank you very much Shewolf and thank you for the friend invite...I look forward to reading your gre.. read more
Aw that is gorgeous, again it has a very nice flow and the rhyming is great. I loved the imagery here.
you're very talented, I'm looking forward to reading more of your works :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jdwhelan

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the comment ! I just came here from another site where I have over 200 poem.. read more
annabellee

11 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)

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Added on June 19, 2013
Last Updated on June 19, 2013
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