morning light casts long shadows where trees amass and grow wild harboring mere mortals savoring newfound secrets at work in the dimly lit night werewolves trail the slender moon digging out curses buried deep along the way on the outskirts of the city early morning trains whistle and howl and slowly garner steam hauling away memories that never truly existed
Wiw! This is really simething unique in matter and manner. The description is so lovely that I like the diction and well arranged portrayal of natural beauty. The final stanza is superb..
on the outskirts of the city
early morning trains whistle and
howl and slowly garner steam
hauling away memories that
Thanks keep writing...
never truly existed
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much for commenting on my poem.
10 Years Ago
Thanks..It need one tour more to expose the meaning clearly....The first two stanzas also show your .. read moreThanks..It need one tour more to expose the meaning clearly....The first two stanzas also show your power of description authentically as though the werewolves are howling in my ears..
I was born November 13, 1961 in Rock Island, Illinois, and grew up across the Mississippi River in Davenport, Iowa. In 1984 I graduated from the University of Iowa with a B.A. in English. My first poe.. more..