Under One Sun

we  one    strong       souls.

Together      become of divergent

     they         many     a       mind.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I liked how this crisscrosses in wording...
a different type of read...
challenges my mind...
rather than just the norm...

[Riley Bray]

I'm glad you liked the style I was inspired to try something new. :) Thanks for taking time out of your day to review my work!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

its the presentation...and the the rest is easy...when there is interest in the lines...yw

[Tai Ryens]

Hearts that fit each other perfectly always provide better comfort than the two minds that interlock lovingly and appeal to each other through thoughts. A divergent soul, a divergent mind; quite a similar concept although entirely different as well. Enticing, Riley, well done.

[Riley Bray]

Thank you very much Tai, I thought I'd try something new and I'm glad you liked it. :)