Willow in the Water

Whisper to me not,

For I've found you

To be guilty. 

Your shrieking plea's

Will not to me reach.

You are a pathetic mongrel,

A maggot worm at these feet of mine.

And I hear your solemn cries,

Your blasphemous wails

As I peer through the looking glass.

Your dirty face teems with 

Flesh-eating creatures,

Your cracked lips peeling back

To reveal the pit that is your throat.

Shall I empty my pain

Into your gullet?

Shall I let you suck upon

The teat that is the breast of my suffering?

Swallow, b***h.

If you be me.

Author's Note

A poem on the idea of cheating on someone.
The captcha was "beewise," be-wise.

Reviews

[CountNicholasAlti]

This is very fiery and emotional, well performed. The grotesque imagery was a beautiful thing to read as well, especially the part about the cracking lips revealing the throat, not the mouth. I did find the line "swallow, b***h" to somewhat kill the vibe, as the rest was constructed in such a spiteful and mature manner that that part seemed to childish compared to the rest. Another well done piece.

[Riley Bray]

Ah, haha, I can see how that can deter some people. I'm thankful for your input Nicholas it's very helpful! thank you very much for the review. :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Like the other one...I just read...
the vengeance in this verse...
rings true...and never loses pace...

[Riley Bray]

Thank you. :) Love that you're enjoying my writing. ^^ Thanks for the review!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...you hold interest...more will come to see you...I'm sure of that...

[Tai Ryens]

You portray the fury of a scorned lover really poignantly, well done. Might I say, fourth stanza is my personal favorite, aha.

[Riley Bray]

Haha I thought you may enjoy that one. Thanks for the review Tai. :)