A Misleading Crusador

I don't want to love him...but of course we all do.....

I search the skies and the faraway oceans

Seeking out a lovers tomb

In hopes of salvaging my lost treasure: Youth.

Inscribed in the rocks by my foot are your words

Oh sweet nothing whisperer

Who proclaims damnation on all whose hearts easily quiver

And vow to resurrect foolhardy dreams long lost.

Should you return to me, gatekeeper

Hold my damaged soul in your own and let me delve deeper.

Oh sweet nothing whisperer

I seek our end through our new beginning

Allow me the birth of a new form of us without trust thinning.

Let me shiver in your presence 

For I know my love for you was made to be taboo.

Have me show you.

Reviews

[Felecia]

I can never get over reading your poetry and how amazing of a poet you are. I love this writing (as I love all your writing) and you did yet another amazing job. Good job!

[Riley Bray]

Wow, thanks Felicia! It feels so awesome to have such a wonderful writer praising me haha. I'm about to get to your read requests! (School had been messing up my writing schedule haha). Thanks again!

[Felecia]

Don't worry! I need to get to soooo many read requests myself >.

[Gaurav Walia]

you're an amazing poet, no doubt about that.. i love all your writings and this one is awesome just like all others...

[Riley Bray]

Ah, thank you very much Guarav! I always appreciate seeing another review. X3

[Tai Ryens]

You're a real poetic person, I'd like you to know that. To be a gatekeeper for a lover.. as if it were destiny. Woe, how all we crave the fate.

[Riley Bray]

Wow thanks Tai, I'm really glad you think so. ^^ I think my writing is finally improving now that I'm in High School. Thanks a ton for your review, as always. :3

[Tai Ryens]

I've been in High School and all it's done is give me a headache, aha.

[Porter]

The last four lines of this piece brought everything together wonderfully, let me say that. It's funny when you're going through a..."time"...and fate brings you to wonderful poems such as this. Truly great.

[Riley Bray]

Thanks a lot Fel. x3 I always appreciate it when someone reviews me.^^ Looking forward to reading some more of your poems too. xP