Letter From No one

This is a song, one of my better ones I think. Please review!

Dear all,

I'm finding it hard to remember.

Do you recall

A time when I was better?

Can you bring 

A story to mind?

Do you see

A memory hiding?

Dear all,

I'm finding it hard to remember.

Do you recall

A time when I was better?

Do you think

That people can change?

Do you believe

That very strange?

Dear all,

I'm finding it hard to remember.

Do you recall

A time when I was better?

Do you wish for me?

Do you dream for me?

Do you pray for anything?

Do you hope for me?

Do you want for me?

Do you try for everything?

Dear all,

I'm finding it hard to remember.

Do you recall

A time when I was better?

Do you cry

Your sorry self to sleep?

Would you mind

If I fell with you?

Dear all,

I'm finding this hard to hold onto.

I'm in withdrawal

From all the feelings I shared with you...

So goodbye, say goodbye

To all the moments I knew.......

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

The broken merriments of a lover in which many of us know all too well . . . I liked it

[Riley Bray]

Thanks Tai.

[Wall of Words]

That was very nice. I would say it's one of your better poems as well. :) The way you slowly mold the letter into what you want the reader know it as: a broken lover's story of broken heart... It's very nicely written. :)
Great job
Sylvia.

[Riley Bray]

Thanks a bunch. :) I intend to record myself singing it eventually. :P