A testament to all the numbskulls who can't fathom the impact their words may have. This poem is directed at a girl I absolutely hate who did tell me to kill myself in a fairly blunt way, and a fellow writers work got me thinking about it again.
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This is beautifully written and I'd also like to say remember that there is always reason to keep living and that God created you specifically--individually--for a purpose, whether or not you can see it right now. I guarantee that the future will be brighter if you allow it to come; however long it takes to get better. You are a great and wonderful writer and I hope you continue writing, and more importantly, I hope you continue living and show those that hurt you that you are better than them. Also, remember that the worth of souls is great in the sight of God (Doctrine and Covenants 18:10)--each and every soul individually. I hope this didn't sound preachy or anything because it wasn't meant to. You are extremely talented. Keep up the great work :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks for the review and the kind words, but you should know when it comes down to it my aversion t.. read moreThanks for the review and the kind words, but you should know when it comes down to it my aversion to pain is stronger than my resolve to die. Thanks again, though, I appreciate it. ^^
So true that too many people speak without knowing what their words could lead to. If there was an easier way to show them what they are doing without the loss of an innocent life, then I pray that they see it before it's too late. Life is too precious to throw away just for one person's careless tongue. Nobody should give in to their foolishness. They're not worth it. If you want to prove them wrong, then keep living and show them that you are a much better person then they will ever be. Wonderful poem, and I hope this will shed some light on somebody's actions and make a change before it's too late.
Who's this hateful person???
This poem was strong and very effective..
This kind of people can really hurt someone..
I'm sorry she hurt you so bad..
We're here if you need us..
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Does it even really matter? Seems like is every one. Thanks for your time. ^^
I hate it when people say those words to eachother, even jokingly. Even if they dont mean it the words cut deeper than a blade ever could. Dont listen to people like that and keep up the good, impactful writing
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks for the review Barklight. Honestly, I don't care when my friends say it, but it never ceases .. read moreThanks for the review Barklight. Honestly, I don't care when my friends say it, but it never ceases to increase my hatred for the world when someone else does.
nice poem. I love reading dark poems.
the girl told you to kill yourself? dontpay attention to bull like that. i have been told to kill myself more times then i can remember, i even have a scar proving i tried it once. you are bettet then her. she isnt worth it.
great poem ... keep it up.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks for your time. I'm sorry for your misfortune, kudos to you for finally rising above it though.. read moreThanks for your time. I'm sorry for your misfortune, kudos to you for finally rising above it though.
Yeah, I've known people like that.
People who call you fowl names and tell you to do harm to yourself.
You know why I think that girl did that to you?
She's jealous because you have a brain, she's jealous because you have more personality and artistic nature in one toenail than she has in her whole body.
If you kill yourself, you're not doing the world a favor, you're giving it a great loss.
This is a nice, dark poem spoken from the heart.
Well done, and ignore those jerks who tell you to kill yourself because you're more than that. ^^
She told you to kill yourself? I LOVE people like that! *rolls eyes in utter sarcasm* Listen, as you know, people like that have disgusting personalities and need to learn how to cope with the inner turmoil they have that causes them to lash out at others. But then again, you do have the occasional "numbskull" (I like your word choice so I'm going to mimic it) who's just a terrible person and says those things simply because they can. Theres one in every crowd, unfortunately. Whatever the case, don't let her get to you. Sorry you're angry, but just remember you're a billion times better than garbage like that. Despite its dark tone, this is an absolutely fantastic poem. I've always loved your writing. Please keep it up. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks Kuro. Rare to see you write a review. :P Also thanks for supporting my writing, since you've .. read moreThanks Kuro. Rare to see you write a review. :P Also thanks for supporting my writing, since you've been doing it for a while. I intend to do the same for you. Thanks again.
"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside of you."---Maya Angelou
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