It is brilliant how you make a sentence out of a few words in the poem!
This is so Taylor Swift-ish (if you ever bought her albums you would see that there are a few letter capitalized in the lyrics. Put them together and they form a sentence.)
About the poem. It is between nice to fantastic. Now you chose :)
Fantastic of course!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
PS - I suppose this is the first time you have sworn in your poem?
Ah, well, not the first time. Some of my older works have swears in them also, but they're rare. :P .. read moreAh, well, not the first time. Some of my older works have swears in them also, but they're rare. :P Why?
My, such hatred for Stephen, I almost feel pity for her. I quite love the reference to the return of razors upon the wrist, such things intrigue me to think that the thought of hurting oneself would surely bring pain to another; my, I find the moment relateable. Well done speaking your mind, keep it up.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks Tai. And yeah, I have a feeling that same hatred will stay with me for a while. Oh the things.. read moreThanks Tai. And yeah, I have a feeling that same hatred will stay with me for a while. Oh the things I would give to never have had him enter my life in the first place.
I like this, who is Stephen? It shows how angry you both are for whatever this man has done. Bravo(:
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Stephen is the cocky little b*****d that my friend is infatuated with and lustful towards, (though s.. read moreStephen is the cocky little b*****d that my friend is infatuated with and lustful towards, (though she calls it love, which if you saw how obsessed she was you, as I do, would blatantly disagree), who has convinced my best friend that I'm using her. Never mind that this next year is our Decade Friendaversary. I simply asked her if she actually wanted me around, (since she was giving me the cold shoulder), a query I thought would give birth to a simple answer. But no, of course not, far too much to ask, right? She told him about how I gave her an 'ultimatum,' and he said if I was cruel enough to do that to her she shouldn't be friends with me. NINE YEARS I have stood by her side through all kinds of crap, and then this random guy comes along who she gets a crush on, and after ONE YEAR she does everything he says. Like honestly. What is up with that? Now, sorry for my tangent, but THAT, my friend, is why I say he deserves to rot in only the fierest, or frostiest, of hells.
11 Years Ago
I think he deserves to rot in hell too, I had a boyfriend like that once, b*****d. So what are you g.. read moreI think he deserves to rot in hell too, I had a boyfriend like that once, b*****d. So what are you going to do about your friend, are you gonna be there when Stephen leaves her or are you gonna stand by her?
11 Years Ago
To be honest, I'm pissed with her also. I can't just blame him since she allowed him to do it. Thing.. read moreTo be honest, I'm pissed with her also. I can't just blame him since she allowed him to do it. Thing is, though, they AREN'T bf and gf, he just has her wrapped around his finger and is leading her on. I'm so mad that its gotten to the point that being around her makes me angry or depressed. Frankly, I would have taken a hiatus from our friendship already, but she's extremely introverted and I'm her only friend in real life, so leaving her wouldn't be good. Stephen also has depression and whenever he has episodes, she starts having anxiety attacks and gradually getting worse. I feel like, since she and Stephen have purely an internet relationship, someone has to take care of her in the real world. So, as a test of friendship, I'm standing by her. I called her my sister for so many years that to leave her now, in her time of need whether she knows it or not, is the highest kind of betrayal. You know? :/
11 Years Ago
It's just infuriating how easily manipulated she is....she just doesn't understand how people have u.. read moreIt's just infuriating how easily manipulated she is....she just doesn't understand how people have ulterior motives. I just want the best for her but she see's the best in the people, which isn't always that great a thing...
11 Years Ago
yeah i know what you mean but at the same time you cant let yourself be treated like crap. If its an.. read moreyeah i know what you mean but at the same time you cant let yourself be treated like crap. If its an internet thing, why is she so involved, dating online shouldnt be serious at all
11 Years Ago
Hoo boy, sorry about that. He just gets my goose, ya know? Anyway I'll get to your read requests soo.. read moreHoo boy, sorry about that. He just gets my goose, ya know? Anyway I'll get to your read requests soon, I didn't do any for a while so they piled up and I'm going in order. Give me a day or two and I'll get to it. Night
She's the kind of girl that latches on to one person, she just doesn't choose the right people, usua.. read moreShe's the kind of girl that latches on to one person, she just doesn't choose the right people, usually. I like to think I'm one of her good choices, not one of her mistakes. I may deserve better, but she doesn't deserve to be alone. I can't let her kill herself. Whether I like it or not, I love her and she needs me. When I made the vow, sisters forever, that's what I meant...no matter what.
"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside of you."---Maya Angelou
"I'm not even going to get mad anymore...I'm just gonna start expecting the lowest from the people I thought h.. more..