Just Another Freak Show

Nothing stays

And nothing goes

We're just another freak-show.

Put around for the public

To witness, and get to know, no.

Nothing

Is what we

Want it to be.

Everything

Is what we

Can't admit separately.

And its getting old, its getting old.

Nothing stays

And nothing goes

We're just another freak-show.

Put around for the public

To witness, and get to know, no.

Often

We sit alone

Out in the freezing cold.

And always

We sit alone

Dreaming for something more.

And its getting old, its getting old.

Nothing stays 

And nothing goes

We're just another freak-show.

Put around for the public

To witness, and get to know, no.

Fighting is a loss

No matter how you see it.

No one there to cross

In this awfully gray existence.

No, no, no no no.

Its getting old, its getting old.

Nothing stays 

And nothing goes

We're just freak-show.

Put around for the public

To witness, and get to know, no.

Author's Note

This links to my third journal entry.

Reviews

[Felecia]

I can actually imagine this being a song, and a very popular one too. The kind of song that you hear on the radio very frequently. I can feel all the emotions that was poured into this, radiate of this wonderfully written piece. You did an amazing job. Love it

[Riley Bray]

Thank you SO much, you have no idea how proud that makes me. ^^ Thanks for the review!

[Felecia]

Really? Well I'm glad that you're proud, because you should be! And you're welcome :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Feel the emotion and it is getting old. Excellent read and write. Sounds like it would be played in C flat.

[Riley Bray]

You have a good sense of song! I do assume to sing it and it is meant to be in c flat. Thanks for the review!

[Acucena G.]

You know what to do when you have an inspiration , this is a great job and nicely written , keep it up

[Riley Bray]

Thanks.

[Acucena G.]

my pleasure

[minnie:)]

This is really good, your words were chosen perfectly for the poem. I loved it :)
~Minnie

[Riley Bray]

This was actually a song but thanks. :)

[quinfinn]

so glad you chose to join in the festivities. welcome to the carnival...(look up the origins of the word "carnival" you may be surprised) clever write!

[Riley Bray]

Thank you! X)

[quinfinn]

welcome.....always