False Freedom

Even in death there is no one to protect you.

Alarmingly slow, 

The gateway shall open, 

Revealing the Utopia behind it. 

One false step, 

And surely this dream will come to an end, 

For the forsaken are forbidden.

Drip. Drip.

Drop.

I'm finally melting into the death I deserve.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

death....awaits us all. i am no stranger to death and thus do not fear it....we all die a little every day. most fear dying all at once and with finality. as for me , give me la petit morte. very clever and engaging little write.

[Riley Bray]

Thank you.

[quinfinn]

welcome

[Lina Grey]

you seem to be all for death by ice... lol i like this. it's slow and steady, and it sounds really cool when i say it out loud in a deep voice. the ending is a powerful statement that leaves a lot of questions- why do you deserve the death? what did you do? an excellent write dear.

[Riley Bray]

Thank you very much! And haha, I suppose I am. xP Everyone has their preferences right? Haha.

[Lina Grey]

haha yeah. I've always been more of a death by fire... everyone has their preferences :J

[Riley Bray]

Totally. :P