I Hope You CHOKE

Karma is merciless.

I hope you choke, you foul idiot.

Hope you drown in your lies,

Only to get stuck among the

People wishing to 

Evade the misery of losing me.

You'd better get your act together soon

Or you'll end up the

Unloved underdog yet again.

Coming to me, pleading, will get you nothing. So go rot in

Hell instead, and stain your 

Obsidian nightmares,

Kneel down and beg for mercy, because

Everyone will watch you choke on your lies.

Reviews

[Becky]

Damn, that was vicious. And a little choppy, but screaming with emotion. It was brutally honest and I loved it.

That just screamed at me. I swear it did.

Well. That was kind of shocking, but excellently written. That is like pure, raw emotion on a page. Nice work.

[Riley Bray]

Thanks for the feedback, I'll make sure to keep an eye on that as I go on!