Battery Low

Wrote a little thing when I was trying to sleep. Nothing fancy just some words.

Author's Note

Review if you like, thoughts and opinions are always welcome. As always thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Relic]

We've all become addicted to the screen in front of us which probably doesn't help are eyes much. Reading at night when sleep evades is always enjoyable if you're comfortable.

Liked this.

[Karmee]

Very creative, and really enjoyable. I like this piece

[Joshua McNay]

Thank you I am happy to hear you liked it. Thank you for the review.

[Damien Ridge]

Nice little poem that fits today's society very well. A lot of people can connect with it! Thanks for sharing.

[Joshua McNay]

Thank you! I am happy to hear you liked it. Thanks for reading!

[emipoemi]

This is a fun read! Profound even in some places, particularly at the end, where the story is kind of open-ended, left to interpretation. Quite enjoyed the story, the musicality, the imagery. All well-crafted! Well done

[Joshua McNay]

I am happy to hear you like my fun little poem. Didn't think it was profound but glad to hear someone found something in it. Thank you for the review.