Virtually the best poem I've read of yours so far, and it would be tuned to perfection were 3 more syllables to be added somewhere in the penultimate line. Well done!
Wow... smart , creative , innovative, fabulous.. mostly people write an ACROSTIC that has first letters of each line to form the title of the poem . But you created it through the middle words... Kudos....
Poetry is not always that follows rules... Creating your own is what makes your write unique and YOURS!
Loved it. Keep it up
Thanks for sharing. Inspired
I write about a Little Red Fox, I hope you enjoy his adventures as much as I do! Thanks for stopping by and as always thank you for reading!
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