Up Too Late

Up Too Late

A Poem by Joshua McNay
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I am up way too late wrote a fun little thing that popped into my head.

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It's time for me to go to bed,
and rest my oh so weary head.
A night of slumber calls out to me,
excited for what my dreams will be.

© 2016 Joshua McNay


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Joshua McNay
Written before I fell asleep, just for fun. Review if you like. Hope you enjoy.

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Im going with hot mess on this one.. maybe you'll get to score with the princess if doing so without waking her dragon lol ... well ffs... keep us posted:-)... also..
Hi!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Don't know much about poems but it's pretty good.
There are just a few grammatical errors that I can see- the capital 'E' after a comma in 'excited', and the comma after 'a' in the last line. But that's no doubt the result of writing at the edge of sleep.


Posted 8 Years Ago


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Like rhyming, like this, lighthearted fun

Posted 8 Years Ago


lol, there's only one way to find out! ............zzzzzzzz

Fun little poem Josh! thanks for sharing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 29, 2016
Last Updated on August 17, 2016
Tags: Sleep, dreams, bed

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Joshua McNay
Joshua McNay

Grand Junction, CO



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