We Never Got To Say ....

We Never Got To Say ....

A Poem by jlbbnn83
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Dedicated to those we have lost & never got to say those last words to

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We Never Got To Say ….

 

As you look through a haze,

You await that final breath,

Your body as pale as ice,

All strength abandoned.

 

And now it’s your turn

To look over us,

As we did over you,

Only a short time ago,

 

Hear those special words pass our lips

that we never got to say …

“Goodbye, We’ll miss you & We’ll always love you”

 

(Dedicated to all those loved ones who are no longer with us)

© 2011 jlbbnn83


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Simple but detailed at the same time. It's incredibly soulful and heartfelt.

"And now it’s your turn
To look over us,
As we did over you,
Only a short time ago"
Those lines definitely hit me.

Posted 11 Months Ago


This is so heartfelt, and pure in intention. There are not many words to say, when the ones we love are gone. And I think you said them beautifully for us all. This is a beautiful and simple write, with love and lose - to those we miss so much.

Posted 12 Years Ago


what a beautiful Poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


jlbbnn83,

Nicely done, the sentiment was there, the feeling was obvious and the love was felt...

This is a beautiful tribute, for those who we never got to say goodbye to.

I didn't see one mistake or one forced word... pure and perfect.

Have a great day,

Legacy

PS This should be on the Love contest for Poetic Infusion Society... if you don't already have one there.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great Write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 3, 2011
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jlbbnn83
jlbbnn83

United Kingdom



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i'm 28. i started writing 1 1/2 yrs ago & have published one book of short stories & poems, nearly finished work for a second book, and am nearly finished my first & only play (haha, it's been hard). .. more..

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