No light

its like snowflakes only lighter

 No Light

 

 

light
light 
light 
as 
a 
feather

still
born

no 
life 

light
as
a
feather

falling
falling
falling

snow
cold
sky

falling
falling
falling on the ground

footprints
footprints

footprints in the sand

sea rolling
rolling 

into me 
and you 

lost 
lost 
lost 

baggage

brown 
brown
brown field

folding 
folding 
into yesterday

yesterday
yesterdayesterday

train 
train 
train 

travelling through 
stations

fast 
day

fast night 

fast lane

still 

born 

no 
life 

no light......................................

Reviews

[jdking]

Thanks for reading and review...............jd

[Leica]

nicely done and it reads so well..

[Sami Khalil]

Nice, artistic, feathery,...:)