Fresh Start

Fresh Start

A Poem by Jess C

In an instance,
Your life could change,
In an instance,
You could meet someone new,
Who would take all the cares away,
In an instance,
You will realize,
What you thought,
You knew was wrong,
Take time to notice,
When you deserve better,
Take time to set a plan to action, 
Take charge of your life,
They say it's a choice to love,
Others sat it would never fade away,
But it happened to me,
Here I am alone,
So here's to a new start<3

© 2015 Jess C


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Wonderful piece. I think everyone can relate to the feeling of wanting a new start but being scared to fight for it.
Quick note though, In line five I think you meant to say "WHO would take all the cares away."
Instead of WHOM.
Who is used for the subject whereas whom is used for the object.
But other than that i think this is a perfect work of art.
And i can totally relate to the feeling.
Stay inspired.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Jess C

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!



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Wonderful piece. I think everyone can relate to the feeling of wanting a new start but being scared to fight for it.
Quick note though, In line five I think you meant to say "WHO would take all the cares away."
Instead of WHOM.
Who is used for the subject whereas whom is used for the object.
But other than that i think this is a perfect work of art.
And i can totally relate to the feeling.
Stay inspired.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Jess C

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!
Find another like you and enjoy the company.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jess C

9 Years Ago

Thank you!

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My family is my world. I am a student and aspiring writer. I have been through many things in life, I write about my life or some things for my friends. I am passionate, tortured, I am me. more..

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