Burn

I've had some pent up anger, and this is about no one person in particular, but my blended feelings about a few specific people in my life in relation to my future. 4/17/2012

It's my life to live, not yours.

Don't tell me what I should do. 

If I wanted your opinion

I'd have asked it of you. 

You judgments are not welcome.

I don't care what you say.

Keep your thoughts to yourself

Because I'll live my life my own way.

You think you know better.

You think you're so wise.

If that were true, tell me,

Why are you the Queen of Lies?

You criticize my life like you live it

Yet your life is nothing but a projection.

Little miss know-it-all

Has to be the image of perfection.

You act like you care 

And yet you never come around.

I'm going to live my own life.

Stop trying to burn my dreams to the ground.

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Never let anyone turn your dreams off ..... for a parent a friend , its something hard to see sometimes that your child your friend is doing a mistake , but the wisdom is to undersatand hat this mistake can teach him / her , make them better... you are grown now . keep your dreams , listen only to people that you know , that hey really love and care .... leave all others behind

[no sun]

A great release for built up anger. Nicely done!

[Kaitlyn Raiford]

This is beautiful and bursting with feeling. I can sense the strong annoyance and anger. The way that your words were put together .. They just had an amazing rhythm.

[Poetry child]

well now this displayed a very passionate soul, and a pretty determined one too so I must say bravo for standing up and holding firmly to your position...nice emotive ink. :)