The Old Ones

2004

Who are the makers of me?

The mysterious ones

The makers of all that I see

My eternal parents

My partners in crime

The ones who always see me through

The ones who know the real me

They are all that I will ever need

My Lord and my Lady

The ever eternal Goddess and God

Author's Note

Yay, religion.

Reviews

[Brandon Lee]

You had something very devious going on there, but the gods part in the poem seem to make it bleh. I assume your referencing paganism perhaps. You forgot to add the bloody sacrifices that seemed to have been obliterated from that said religion. I like everything but the last two lines. Keep it up!