I SEE YOU (Just If)

Ever didn't have something or someone you felt belonged to you?

 

If I breathed in the light of your emergence

If I kneeled in complete mercy of your feel

If I told you how I high I feel

If I told you how deeply your desired the reason I deep breathe at night and grip my pillow tighter.

I’ am where you belong you and him are wrong, don’t I feel righter.

Would you deny my sacrifice to just be apart of your life.

To just touch her

Clutch her

Lust to love her

Or be the serene parts of her dreams.

Its weird because I never chose to find love, though it notices me

He humps you like he’s thirteen

I’d grind you just for a taste of your body’s stream.

You see, he’ll never understand the richness of your beauty.

Till he has no money

He will never enjoy the fruits of your intellect

Till he goes hungry.

Like he’s, looking for gold when he has diamonds

Already rich and still doing crime

So I must ask one more time.

If I gave all I had to be your now and him your then

If you only knew how I shutter just by glancing when you grin.

If only I could be the beautiful fate you never chose

If only you know how high I place your soul

Could I have you?

Make me your statue

 

I fit into your mold

 

I’ll let your lips be the pages

My hands make the words

With our love the greatest story told.

Just If………

Just If………

You gave me your name.

Reviews

[Candid Writer]

Wowwwwww weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! This is hot. I always have a soft spot of "What Ifs," but this my friend did not need my soft heart for its passion to sink in and melt away gently. It would warm even the hardest of hearts. I cannot pick a favorite line, because the are all equally great and powerful. After reading this poem, it felt like a great and mighty wind swept through my heart, yet it did not tear it apart... it just allowed it to melt away effortlessly.

C'est si bon mon ami. C'est brilliante!

[Goddess Sophia (filomen..]

ohhhhhh gurl just give him the name.....

[Mr. Deft Diction]

Yo, this is a dope piece. Just go thru and clean up the usual stuff that happens when we first pen things; but other than that...you've got something here.

Strong piece.

[Spiceepoet]

My eyes are much brighter having had the pleasure of reading your words...

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

To love from afar can be hard(so I have heard), Even though I can't relate to this poem, I still really like it.

[Quaysa]

Isn't it crazy? You love someone and you'd give anything for them to feel the same. Or even half of the same. Even a portion. You want them to want you back but without the confinement. You want them to want you enough to leave the extras behind and when they don't, you are disappointed but still hopeful. The flow of this poem was crazy hot. I like the sensuality that you put on it.
Good write.
~Quaysa~

[Marquise]

WHEW!!!!! BROTHER, THIS IS MOS DEF GOING IN THE LIBRARY.. YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE OT TEL ME, BUT I KNOW YOU LIVED THIS POEM..

YOU CAN'T WRITE SOMETHING AS POWERFUL AS THIS IS AND NOT LIVED IT...
I CAN'T BEGIN ON HOW MUCH THIS HITS HOME FOR ME... MAN.

HE WILL NEVER ENJOY THE RICHES OF YOUR INTELLECT, TILL HE GOES HUNGRY..
THATS CRAZY.. I KNOW WHAT THAT FEELS LIKE.
I TRULY FELT THIS ONE...

I'LL GET TO IT TECHNICALLY IN A FEW, BUT WOW, MAN. YOU REALLY DID A GREAT JOB WITH THE FLOW OF IT, THE COMPOSITION AND CHOICE OF GRAMMAR.

TO COMPLETELY GIVE YOUR FREEDOM TO SOMEONE IN RETURN FOR THEIR LOVE IS AS DEEP AS IT CAN GET, ESPECIALLY WHEN THEIR IS AN "OBSTACLE" IN THE WAY....
VERY, VERY GOOD JOB SIR.

[Ms. Unheard Voice]

Wow !!! I can't type enough words to tell u how great this one was. I'm a new reader of your's and I look forward to reading some more of your works because you are truly gifted!!

[Literary Queen Na Tasha..]

If I gave all I had to be your now and him your then

If you only knew how I shutter just by glancing when you grin.

I love this part...I love the entire piece really. Your words are vivid and I like you intensity in this piece. I felt it all the way through...Becuase I felt this same way before. Thanks for sharing...

[Marie Starr]

he�ll never understand the richness of your beauty.

Till he has no money

He will never enjoy the fruits of your intellect

Till he goes hungry.

Like he�s looking for gold when he has diamonds

Already rich and still doing crime

these lines ... are absolutely sublime ...

[Elizabeth]

I missed you man ... this one gave me goosebumps ... oh how wonderful it would be to be that woman ... so badly desired and wanted and quite possibly loved ... you rock Real as always!