Words To Soak In

Run a hot bath for me,
Watch, as I undress -
I don’t care
Everything, as it falls away
and everything, as it hits floor
for I am here
Come sit with me
while I slip into these waters,
while I submerse
Read to me a story,
pull these rings from my fingers,
Wash, behind my ears
and while you do,
tell me of your boyhood,
of your brokenness,
and be honest -
Undress,
layer by layer

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

A physical and then a mental undressing under the direction of seduction. Getting a guy to show his brokenness is a hard task indeed. Very nice read on a chilly night.

[Cafe Reader]

Very sensual.

[Robin]

warm and inviting , beautiful words of openess

[InkSlinger]

Brilliant piece of writing.. I think Selene said it best..

[Ed Hart]

man, it got crowded in here...

[bluessadmood]

Ohh my ,how sweet,tell the truth,i liked the undressing process
it gives certain warmth to the ongoing liason,and relation,how you start
i am letting all pieces fall off me right in front of you
i never care to bare it all,see me right to the skin
count the pores want you to numerize them and tell it as a secret
between you and me..alright now you start undressing again all of it
want to see you all ,tell me all of it since you were born
hide nothing want to see it all,all the secrets told to me and shown clear to my eyes
want to memorize every inch of you ,body and history ,you are all mine
how i enjoyed this ,one of my favourites of all times
lovely write..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

brilliant blending~ unclothing has many variations~ you present two notes of it in perfect harmony~