metalmadefaery

Metal made fairies are clouding my mind,

They are staring, loving, mischiovous when all combined

A queen of these faries comes along with promises to make me happy

She is floting around in my vacant darkness

I fall when she says "Hi my name is Tabby!"

Such lovely laughter that she brings

Such a beautiful voice when she sings

Opens my mind to new and wonderful things

I would have never known the art inside of me

I would have never known the beauty of the winter sea

I owe it all to this on Metal made fairy

But now where is she?

Completely gone without a word

Deep inside I feel an unsavorry hurt

My mind is spinning

Wonderland twirls are forming

The wind is blowing

My mind is storming

Will I ever find a metal made fairy again?

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A stark and relative piece, that riles and stands to a reader, a most delicate read, well done

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is awesome, I love how it started all happy and the imagery was amazing, the sentences longer, then it got to the bad side and the sentences shortended and The imagery slowly turning dark, great work :)
Yours Faithfully,
Jenny

[Muse]

Interesting take on fairies. Your style is free without rules and without certainty. I enjoyed it!