First love

Sterling silver lips

My first kiss

Oh how I wish

I could go back on this

Tranquilizing eyes

Had me hypnotized

Oh how our lifes were entwined

Perfect little grins

I never knew the trouble I was in

Falling around a perfect world

The hearts in my eyes unfurled

Outside of it nothing did exist

Blinded by a heart made of enchanting mist

So cruel was the fate at hand

A punch in the stomach didn't fit in my plans

Now spinning ground is the surface I stand

Gazing into night stars

Wondering the mystery of who you are

If you can hear my words

I have you heard my whispers of

 

 

I love you

 

 

As they fade away

 

into something so beutiful

 

led astray

Author's Note

Not really done with this I like how it started but I can't seem to find the words to finish it....help would be great

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An almost delivered piece that soaks in emotion like a sponge does water, well done

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is so cute :3 I adore the layout as it gets to the end of the poem :) x

[XxtaintedxX]

Love this one too

[Muse]

Short but sweet, loved it!