Doors

Doors

A Poem by John the Baptist
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A meditation on choices

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Love and rage dwell
In the same house,
In different rooms.

You have the keys to
Both doors,

And you may enter
Either at any time,

But know this:

One door leads to
Peace, the other
To destruction.

The choice is yours,
But so is the outcome.

Choose wisely.

Choose well.

© 2019 John the Baptist


Author's Note

John the Baptist
Choose you this day whom ye will serve.

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I think the problem is with how we should control our emotions, when they take the lead and seem to control everything inside us, here comes the problem leading to destruction (of course speaking of the negative emotions).

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks, LS. The more emotion that is connected to a thought, the harder is that thought to control.
A choice we make multiple times each day without giving very much thought to the consequences of our actions. If it turns out we made the wrong choice, our self editing brain simply finds a reason that wasnt our fault and discards it from memory. But we are not computers and if this is all we do, then we become less of oursel and more of a figment of what could have been, forever making excuses and never learninh or improving.
Well written and thought provoking piece, asking the questions we should already be asking ourselves.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks. You are right about people avoiding responsibility for their thoughts and actions. Some pe.. read more
Wise words John. Great piece of poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Dawn. It came to me rather easily, after I stopped trying.
i think Peace is the best option...rage does no one any good...ever.

j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks, J. Indeed, peace is also my choice. Unfortunately, many seem addicted to rage. And some o.. read more
this is simple and yet very powerful. There is a maturity of thought here that speaks to your years of experience in human services. I spent the first ten years of my work life in this field and found it exhausting so I applaud you. You make the point that we may choose our path at any time and that it is indeed up to each of us to choose wisely. We choose but we are also responsible for the outcome. That is the part about freedom of choice that many do not understand. We live with our choices and should be at peace with our choices. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks. Many say they don't have a choice in various aspects of their lives, and in many cases they.. read more

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John the Baptist
John the Baptist

Suffolk, VA, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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I am a 79 year old retired human services worker. During my career I saw much human suffering. My writing is geared toward easing that suffering. more..

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