Doors

Doors

A Poem by John the Baptist
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A meditation on choices

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Love and rage dwell
In the same house,
In different rooms.

You have the keys to
Both doors,

And you may enter
Either at any time,

But know this:

One door leads to
Peace, the other
To destruction.

The choice is yours,
But so is the outcome.

Choose wisely.

Choose well.

© 2019 John the Baptist


Author's Note

John the Baptist
Choose you this day whom ye will serve.

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We often chose the wrong door to open. Sometimes with curiosity, sometimes unknowingly. Whatever it is, consequences are always there.
If I get the choices, I would chose to open the LOVE door as I know that LOVE might not always bring me happy consequences but it will never cause me pain.
Wonderful poem. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks. We should always choose the love door. That's not saying it will always be easy, though.
HB Rita

5 Years Ago

Exactly. It does not need to be always easy or happier.
There seems to be enough rage outside the house, so if I am offered a choice, I'll go for the peace and love door, but I'll hope for no squeaky hinges.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks. Even with the squeaky hinges, it's the better choice.
We can have knowledge but need the wisdom to know how to use it. This reminds me of that. We have choices but what we choose depends on our intentions.

Great poem, John.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks. Your comment points out why it is so important to be aware of our own motivations.
so true. our choices have consequences. great food for thought ... :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks. Often we forget the choices we have.
Hi, John. I’ve been perusing your first several poems just now and I really like your focus on wisdom and positivity.

I have gone through periods where I have been positively (love) focused and periods where I have let the darkness over take my mood and thoughts. It is hard to argue with your logic here based on my own experiences.

I am glad to see your work here. The simple but wisdom-filled messages are reminders I can always use. Thanks for sharing your positivity.

It’s nice to meet you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks, and you have made my day. I have seen a lot of human suffering, so my writing is geared tow.. read more
makes you think about the choices you made before. nicely written

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks. We always have a choice, however difficult it may be to make.
How very wise your words are John. So many doors in the mind and heart to either open or keep closed. Great direct, but gentle, style of writing. You warn, but you also guide. Excellent message and write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Annette. Warning is one thing; being able to make the right choices yourself is another.
I like this the concept seems similar to the poem I wrote called "two doors" It's a very wide subject 'choice' can be used so many different ways.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks. Yes, the principle can be applied to many situations in our lives.
Smart and clever. True. I appreciated the piece very much. Thank you

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks. If it helped, it was worth it to me.
Yes life is always about choice. Choosing the right door. I hope I continue to choose with wisdom. Having said that, everyone can make mistakes. However, the mistakes are the ones which cause most havoc. Thank you John. Your writes are always thought provoking.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Chris. I believe we are faced with choices every day, the most significant of which being w.. read more

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John the Baptist
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Suffolk, VA, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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I am a 79 year old retired human services worker. During my career I saw much human suffering. My writing is geared toward easing that suffering. more..

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