PIRATE QUEEN 2

more pirate queen...first 2 verses by Raj with thanks from me...

PIRATE QUEEN 2

Now, the black Marie carried
not a skull and cross-bones she
but, a one jack of a sailing man
backed up by his fiddlers three

They say his frigate was sleek and bold
was of Danish spruce and knotty pine
It's keel manufactured and layed in Old Turku
And was known to often fly three flags


when mam popped me oot
like rum slopped upon the bar
me firey hair springin aboot
like tight wound copper wire
the pegleg barkeep with a wicked leer
fed me a bottle a warm honey beer

christened i was marie dupree
by the bar wench passing clumsy
slopping six tankards upon her b***s n me
proclaiming merrily of me, you know
she howls, just like old capn’ dupree
master n lord a that dark pirate ship black marie...
and so it is i went to sea

at the age a ten plus three
as that capn’s cabin boy
me budding breasts taped flat
me wild hair under a hat
certain you see ,i would never be
like me mam, the chattel toy of any man...

the tales of gold, and pirates bold
were lullabies for me
forming dreams of wanderlust
with all the force a me blunderbuss
ahhh were me mothers milk ya see
when drunken louts talked in shouts
of treasures sent cross the sea
i memrized the name o the ships
an all the relevant quips
n took em to sea wi me

in me second year wi dupree
he discovered the truth o me
in the cargo hold me he found
wi me breasts unbound
an with lust so bold he grabbed ahold
an would ha ravished me
instead a he thrust deep in me
me dirk i burried viciously
to tha hilt in he, and thus
with a single thrust
i claimed the black marie

Author's Note

please add to our tale in kind if you please

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Now, on the Black Marie
I was, aye, a stow-away
and I witnessed the derring-do
of the the new born red-headed
Pirate Queen with her bouncing
red tipped breasts unbound
and I had to salute her so!
Aye, but in doing so, I gave
my self away
and she locked her fiery eyes on me
I was not so sure if that
was such a good to thing to do
oh no, but, she hooked her finger
smiled, and started aproooooching me!

[Amber Lily]

This is fantastic! I love all of this pirate stuff, it hits me in my core, maybe I was a pirate in a past life. This has great flow and the vocabulary is spot on, very impressed yet again! Great work :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this tale. Myth and tale, my favorite. I like the artwork and the ladies in the tale. No weakness in the outstanding tale of the sea and the woman.
Coyote

[Emily]

I love it!!
Keep on writing!

[dan]

Well, shiver me timbers! I think a lot of people still have romanticized thoughts of pirate tales of their past, buccaneers and mateys alike. Your write was an adventure come alive, a painting that I wish had been painted by my favorite, Boris Vallejo (but he didn't paint pirates). Anyway, your writing takes the artist's brush and paints a tremendous picture of such daring action. Thank you for sharing this great gift with us. take care...dan

[daninstockholm]

hahaaa,, love it!! A great sailors tale very well told, entertaining style, well written, great job!

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you for the delightful reply