RAINING SOFTLY

a rain wish for firefighters everywhere

RAINING SOFTLY
guitar blues playing
across the soul of heaven..
light rain, still water.

Reviews

[Indra Neil]

blissful and serene imagery in this wonderful brevity! :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you, this is one of my favorite forms because it says so much with so few words

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome! truly said! :)

[Bare trees]

~ Final peace and stillness are what this is about for me. The melody of blues floats through heaven. Great poem. ~

[jacob erin-cilberto]

exce..ent senryu....i hear those blues playing
but also hear those praying
for rain to wash away the fires.

[jeannemarie coulter]

my thoughts as well...so much is being lost right now to the fires