INSPIRED BY EYES

INSPIRED BY EYES

flowing through the bluesilk hours of dreamtime,
riding the amberslipstream of love
scented of freesiarose ambrosia
i gaze
 into the aquavelvetdamp eyes of the universe
and am enthralled by
what was,
what is,
what will be,
all that we fantasize...
can be if not here
then
in the next reality...

Reviews

[Robert]

Truly lovely piece here with the word selection, amazing. The questions of what was, what is, what will be. I think we all have asked those questions. By the way I'm really behind on my read requests, they hover around 100 all the time even when I try to read 10-12 a day. But I will get to them all I promise.

[sinNsincerity]

Beautiful write Mrs. Coulter! I am one to live in a reality beyond the five senses, so I truly enjoyed reading this!

[DoormanDan]

The first thing I have to say is that that picture is very cool. I applaud you for being to give this poem a very enchanting, colorful atmosphere, and for being able to keep it consistent and strong throughout the entire piece. Not once did I think the poem lost its momentum or became dull . Your word use(things like "amberslipstream", "freesiarose ambrosia" and "aquavelvetdamp"(are these actual words?) really enrich the imagery the poem already has going for it. Your creativity is always amazing, my friend. 100/100. :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

the words you question are run together to create a whole single feeling from multiple words: the eyes of the universe are aqua velvet and damp all at once...

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Enchanting.
The next reality promises so much.
Wonderful poem.

[Sami Khalil]

A very lovely piece of art. In my library...:)...............

[Emily]

Vary nice wording!
Well done!
Keep it up!!

[JayceeC]

Jeannemarie, I love the compounding of your descriptive words. Not only are they veat descriptives, they feel beautiful and cohesive, one part of something much larger. Indeed, the power of love has a way of making us feel at one with a continuum, and that there will be another time and place. This is a beautiful piece my friend.

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you so much

[dan]

I've always found looking into the eyes of my love to be the most beautiful view in my world. To imagine looking into the eyes of the universe is such a magnificent undertaking, seeing the history of everything, seeing through to the future of all. What a grand thought! Thank you for taking my imagination on this wonderful journey. take care...dan

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and beautiful flow of words. The eyes are the doors to hope, dreams and possibilities. Beautiful artwork and you left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think there may be more love than we can ever imagine..in that next reality you talk about here...

those bluesilk hours of dreamtime...or wait...is love only in dreams? would hate to think that is true.
but maybe..maybe in that next reality is where the soul mates will come together.