BRIDE OF GREAT PRICE

BRIDE OF GREAT PRICE

A Poem by jeannemarie coulter
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another tale from my childhood

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BRIDE OF GREAT PRICE

in pearlised peach gold of dawn,

spotted horse stopped to water his horses,

and caught a glimpse of morning dove

coming from the forest with a fine pinto mare,

she was singing in her pure sweet voice

and coaxing the mare along with a hand threaded in the mare’s mane,


in the pearlised peach gold of dawn

spotted horse felt the first stirring of desire

to share his life with a woman...

the vision was so true and wild honey sweet

he traded six stolen horses,

and two fine buffalo robes for her,

and that,

grandfather said,

to the many grandchildren

gathered at his feet as he smoked his pipe,

is how i met

and claimed your grandmother,

and,

she was...

 still is...

will always be

a bride worth a great price...

© 2015 jeannemarie coulter


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loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

thank you i enjoyed the creation of this tale
I love this one!
I love that picture too!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


That's lovely. You might capitalize their names. That tripped me a bit.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

i will think about your advice about the capitals, however, in my long life i have found little wort.. read more
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dan
Six stolen horses and two buffalo robes IS a pretty steep price. But all men in love with a woman's soul and who would like her to be his for life would gladly pay a grand price for her to join him in making a life. And if he wouldn't then that is not a wise (or good) man, that is a user. A very original piece of writing, working the Native American lore into the telling was a brilliant idea. jeannemarie, you've outdone yourself with this one. Great job! take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh wow, that was really sweet! I enjoyed reading this one :) Great writing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh my gosh I love this!
Great story!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

thanks and blessings to thee
Cherry Pepperweb

9 Years Ago

You're welcome and thank you. :)
A amazing tale my friend.
"she was...
still is...
will always be
a bride worth a great price..."
The above lines are perfect. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

thank you my friend...according to grandmother it is a true shoshone tale she heard as a child in w.. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I like the old tales and legends and you are welcome.
A story that touches the heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

9 Years Ago

now you look more like a pale writer
jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

thank you for the kind words and thoughts
Lovely poem you have written Jeannemarie. The last lines I enjoyed the best.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

thank you so very much...i love the tales grandmother would tell...
Robert

9 Years Ago

Grandparents always had the best tales.
A beautiful story, Jeannemarie... love the imagery you create... soft, warm colours in your words...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

thank you, ft. i love retelling grandmothers tales...
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9 Years Ago

you have a gift, jeannemarie, and in fine oral fashion of your family you are carrying on that wonde.. read more
jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

you might like the pacing mustang tale...it is another my granfmother told to me,,,thank you for the.. read more

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