THE REDHEAD

THE REDHEAD

in the heat of torrid passion

a vision flash fired across his mind

hot melted amber liquid

flowed through his veins

ahhhh lover...

ahhhhh please ...

ahhhhhh honey...

to her satin slick whisper,

watch out sweetheart,

my love,

if you come too close

you might be hurt

because,i am dangerous

i am a red headed woman

and we live in a class all our own...

Reviews

[dan]

I often hear redheads described using the word 'fiery.' My first wife was a redhead and she could be called fiery as well as other less flattering words, but 'fiery' definitely fit best. There are several ethnic references to redheads that I will not mention for fear of being misunderstood and accused of using slurs. Your final line I believe says it best: a class all their own. take care...dan

[Emily]

I really like this one!!
Keep it up!

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Red heads, I've known a few. Definitely a passionate breed full of fire!

[wordman]

a wonderful piece,and red heads being in there own category is true.
loved the photo,i know it`s really you

[Maja]

The line

"satin slick whisper"

for some reason made it sound more dangerous and sensual. That line's what got me hooked.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"i am a red headed woman
and we live in a class all our own... "
I have met some dangerous red hair beauties in my time. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Perkele.7885]

Passion crosses all color lines, natural and self-inflicted!

[....................]

My mother's advice to my younger brother when he fell in love with a redhead was, and I quote: "be careful my son, she's a redhead!" Fortunately he did not heed her ominous and ambiguous warning because they now have two beautiful kids and are quite happy :D

Love the words and the picture, Jeannemarie... I think lots of people with many different hair colours can be dangerous... but like Jacob, I like red and I like to play with fire, sometimes lol...

[MsJewel]

The fire and sizzle of a redheaded woman! Beautifully penned!

:) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have a weakness for redheads...stark red or auburn---mmmm

i almost touched this poem, but it was too warm...dangerous.

[jeannemarie coulter]

LOL...thank you for the delightfully kind words