FAIRY FOREST MORNING

FAIRY FOREST MORNING

A Poem by jeannemarie coulter


FAIRY FOREST MORNING

walk with the sunlight
along the fairy trails,
where elf lords and their ladies
have danced the night away...
feel the sun
kissing the ferns,
enticing them into song,
will morning doves coo along
as the redwood forest wakes
stretching to touch the sky...

© 2015 jeannemarie coulter


Author's Note

jeannemarie coulter
the molecules of your body are the same molecules that burn inside the stars themselves, we are star stuff, we are the universe trying to understand itself...LOVE,LUCK,n LAUGHTER...jc

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This is a great poem to go along with this picture. I can see myself walking through it and feeling everything you expressed in the poem, and maybe some slight excitement in hopes of seeing a fairy. Beautiful job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A short poem which I like best is done so well Jeannemarie. The presentation of the poem along with the incredible photograph is just masterfully done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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dan
Your flair for the dramatic write extends now into fantasy lore, with fairies and elf lords traipsing through the wooded glades, reaching for one corner of the whimsical night sky full of stars. If I am the universe trying to understand itself, I'm reaching a better understanding by reading your pieces one by one. And I thank you greatly for that! take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


I'm with Maja... i instantly thought of A Midsummer Night's Dream... this is peaceful and calming...and of course, growing up in a rural village fairies were prominent entities in many stories, so when ever I read "fairy" I am instantly brought back to my grandmother's stories... enjoyed this, Jeannemarie

Posted 9 Years Ago


I appreciate what you have created here Jeannemarie but, I have a personal problem with things that are, or come across to me as too bouncy,too light, too frivolous, giddy,airy, fairygodmotherish!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem reminds me of A Midsummer Night's Dream, bringing into memory shimmering magic and lovely, narcotic scents. However, the last two lines felt a bit out of sync with the previous lines. Other than that, lovely writing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminds me of the magic of Avatar. lovely words and photo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This place sounds absolutely enchanting. :)
I would love to stroll through the forest and nap under a big ole tree. :)
I enjoyed this so much!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

thank you everso...this was from a morning walk i took often near fort brafgg ca...
Cherry Pepperweb

9 Years Ago

Capture the moments! :)
This is so beautiful I would like to be there. Must be a magic place, where fairies dance...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

so happy my words pleased you
kind of brought me back to middle earth...and the Lord of the Rings...

nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


jeannemarie coulter

9 Years Ago

thank you for the kind words...i spend a lot of time in similar places...

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