LOVE DANCING

LOVE DANCING

our love dances
in shimmer skating
rhythms of pas de deux
glimmerglintgleaming
carefully exploding
incessantly scintilating
intricately choreographed together
we expand  infinitely through all the tangents
weaving and embroidering
with iridescent threads
the tapestry of our time,
the lust luster of our existence
the dual spanglesparksparkle
of our life together...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I like the positive feel and energy of the poetry. Dance make two people one in the goal of beauty and the music. Your words create good place and vision. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Perkele.7885]

Dancing either on ice skates or the roller variety is very elegant to watch as all leg movements are extended
making each one much more eye catching esp. to a camera lens.

[JayceeC]

I like the descriptions here with the wordsjammedtogether to give extra effect to them You also have a great visual look to this poem. I see an angel or cherub when I look at this.
"Lust Luster" that description sets my mind racing in all different directions. Its really one of my favorite things...this tickled my brain.

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you for the reading and comment on my word tapestry