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A Poem by jbop

Comfortable, with the frayed edges,

the bumps, scratches and

damp.

But not me.

But now no one’s familiar

But were they ever?

Not me.

Just another person in the room

Happy with tomorrow will be better

But not today.

Good intentions, then lost, then found

now scared.

Negative, positive, indifferent.

“You’ll be high” says

the man who sees unicorns.

Not me.

Blind. A black hole.

This one was practice

Next year’s the one

No. Again.

Just the same.

Trying? To hear!

Well done.

Who’m I kidding.

 

Not me.

 

© 2010 jbop


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Thank you for taking me on a very familiar roller coaster ride.
I can relate to the theme of your poem , more than you can imagine.
I love it ! Bravo! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YOU'RE KIDDING NO ONE WITH YOUR BRILLIANCE IT IS JUST OBVIOUS BRILLIANCE IN POETRY AND ANY OTHER SPECTRUM OF LIFE. YAY YES HOW EXCITRING.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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