A God at Sundown

My words have rhythm and persistency 

I speak in flames of which created me  

My sadness has a constant beat, its my melody 

yet its constantly haunting me, I find harmony 

in the sorrow sea that has chosen me 

to drown in when it becomes too much 

Love is the only thing that can save me now 

My soul will not be saved from love though 

What a foolish distraction love can be 

one minute you are flying, and the next, 

you are drowning in a sea 

I am a God at Sundown, writing verses in the sky 

with my words, i slit wrists and burn bridges down 

to show people how beautiful arrangements of words

has the ability to destroy this whole damn world

Author's Note

Sure, there are grammatical errors. I'm just interested in your own interpretation of the poem and if you liked it or not!

Reviews

[Heartful5160]

I loved it! Great job! I hope you post more things soon, because I can't wait to read more!

[Justin]

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