THANK YOU FOR YOUR EXISTENCE

This is also one of my SONG-like poems. I also wrote this as a Song same with my "A LOVE SONG.

Thank You for Your Existence

By: JAZZYMARS

 

There are times in my life

That I feel cold and lonesome at night

But each time I call your name

In a moment I get alright

 

When I close my eyes

I see you coming extending your arm

And I can hear you whisper and feel

Your love keeping me warm

 

Thank you for being my Savior

Thank you for being my Warrior

When battles very tight

You’re there oh so might

You teach me how to fight

With your presence

I feel the essence

Thank you for your existence

 

There are nights in my dreams

I see you walking right by my side

When I’m lost you show me the way

You hold me giving a guide

 

Every time I feel sick

And when I’m weak you heal my soul

With my faith you give me strength

Your spirit making me whole

 

Thank you for being my Savior

Thank you for being my Warrior

When battles very tight

You’re there oh so might

You teach me how to fight

With your presence

I feel the essence

Thank you for your existence

 

 

-/ jazzymars

 

                                                                                                    

Author's Note

I hope you will feel the essence. Thanks.

Reviews

[Ghania]

Very well written, Jazzy.
There are times in my life
That I feel cold and lonesome at night
But each time I call your name
In a moment I get alright
.
.
There do exist some people whoss existence means everything to us. And we owe much to them.
Loved it!

[jazzymars]

Thanks for dropping by to this poem. "Thank you for you existence" ;)

[Ghania]

😀😀 You're welcome. ;)

[TheIlliteratePanda]

That was wonderful, and i certainly did feel the expression! You've woven a beautiful tapestry of words that is an extremely accurate representation of the joy and comfort we can feel if we allow Him to work in our life! Great Job!

[jazzymars]

thanks.. yup.. it was from deep within

[Phoebe Taylor]

This piece pursues such elegance. Really intriguing to read. I loved It!

[jazzymars]

grazie! grazie!

[Anmarie]

Oh wow. I love it! Really really great.

[jazzymars]

Thanks Ang. I wrote it as a song. ;)

[Anmarie]

You're welcome. That is awesome! I can't write songs lol. I can only really write poems and stories. You're really great at this stuff ^_^

[jazzymars]

yup maybe you cant write songs haha.. but you can write a poem as the lyrics.. ;)

[Anmarie]

Ahh true Haha, Thank u ^_^

[...]

Yes indeed very beautiful song. Faith and hope and love in your words. Very nice.

[jazzymars]

Thanks thanks.

[Abraham George]

To believe there is god and to understand how he act in our life is good.

nice thought and nice message . keep writing this kind songs
thanks for sharing.

[jazzymars]

Thanks George... actually I composed it as a song... I wish I could let you hear it someday.. ;)

[Abraham George]

i hope it soon.

[Firemay]

Jazzy, that was really beautiful, i like how you repeated the verse/ Thank you :)

[jazzymars]

Actually I composed it as a song dear. That is why there is a repeated verse. It will serve as the chorus.

[STARSEED]

Really beautiful thank you very much, really enjoyed that.

[jazzymars]

Thank you for dropping by.