Relapse in B Minor

Relapse in B Minor

A Poem by A.J. Alexander
"

Please?

"

I want to get drunk
off your tongue.

Will you oblige me
this one favor?

© 2008 A.J. Alexander


Author's Note

A.J. Alexander
The underlying message, I guess, is that the narrator wants to revel in the pleasure of drunkenness not from the act of drinking, which is crude and unromantic, but instead from the caress of a lover's mouth. So would I.

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Wow, very captivating and it's only a few words!

I love when writers are able to be so concise with words that they can convey a big message in a small package. :] I think it makes a write even more effective than 50 stanzas of rhyme. XD

This is definitely my style of poetry and I love the whole feeling & message I get from this! And, even further, there's something about the title that makes me love it more! ^^

I just love this. XD

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A.J. Alexander

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