Believe, Dream, Imagine and Hope

I remember your words

you told me of your love

 

I could only feel the pain

of my past so I could not

 

believe .....

 

That you could love me

beyond anything that I could ever

 

dream.....

 

I pushed you away

in every way that one could

 

imagine.....

 

and now that time has shown

that you will never stop loving me

 

I NOW HAVE HOPE!!!

Reviews

[The Half-Blood Princes]

Wow, the spacing in this poem is really, really awkward. The ellipsis and the spaces between the words is just...weird. It breaks up the flow. It's a simple poem which tried to be creative by using 'original' spacing and threw off the flow.

-Half Blood Princes

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

I love it!!!!!! It's just fabulous! I have no complaints or changes!!

[Karina Longo]

It flows so gently like a spring morning song. I like it very much. It's a lovely piece.