Pores

Pores

A Poem by butt muncher

Fear in the form of a wedding dress
Lack of lace speaks volumes
Cinderella takes another shot
And bites her cheeks with passion

Hate in the form of a suit and tie
Pattern uninspired
Michelangelo makes one last stroke
Windows look appealing

Her hands too small to wrap around his neck
Her feet are dipped in ice
His hands large enough to cover her face
This time laced through her hair

The crowd goes wild when she walks
Unaware of the bloodbath that is her mouth
Their eyes are met with sweet smiles
Ignorance radiating 

Looking up would cause a crisis
That could burn buildings
He has never been more interested
By a hanging thread

Ghosts in the dining hall
Haunting the limousine
Taking over the hotel suite 
Coming out the walls

Spirits imbedded in their pores
Heading in the wrong direction
They circle their way through each vessel
Causing a single burst  

© 2015 butt muncher


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I have no idea whats going on! I feel like a student trying to figure the meaning out. I am terrible with metaphors. Can you give me something to go on so when i read it again I dont feel lost? Thanks!

Posted 9 Years Ago


butt muncher

9 Years Ago

its about an abusive relationship, a miserable couple about to get married
Really great poem :D Loved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on August 3, 2015
Last Updated on August 9, 2015
Tags: romance, wedding, marriage, love, haunting, scary, dark, abuse, hate

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butt muncher
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My stories suck but I share them anyway in case someone thinks otherwise. I mostly write plays because even though I find that my stronger area of writing comes with my narration opposed to the dialog.. more..

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