I {Blank} Him, I{Blank} Him Not...

Just sudden and eye opening ephiniany that I couldn't stop from coming to a poem or something of the nature

He loves me, He loves me not

Petals keep falling as I pull at them 

One by one as I think...

Of all our memories, all our moments together

The day he asked me to be his

The times where it wasn't right without him

The nights we couldn't fall asleep without saying

"Good night" To each other

The seconds that made me think nothing was better

Than him holding me, him being near me

The moment he first kissed me

That one time we sat at the porch for an hour

Just talking about nothing but everything at the same time

The feelings that I couldn't and still can't

explain....

And that night under the fireworks, how could I forget?

I could feel the Magic in the air that night

The ways he would convince me that

Chivalry wasn't dead and somehow

Faith existed in a world that could let you down....

How we made the litlle things mean the world

Songs, movies and even games

And when he didn't mind that I was:

Klutzy, or weird or just plain crazy

Everytime I tripped, he caught me

When my needed him most,

He was ready to make me happy again

But when something comes in the way

I can always remember who was and always will be

there...and the one that will never hurt me

I feel safe now and

My faith shaken but still strong

In the end...

He'll always make me believe

He'll be the one to break the pattern of my life

And I'll never forget him...

The guy thats gotten close enough to make me fall...

Reviews

[Pratibha]

My Dear Jasmine, this heartfelt poem from you made me so emotional today ....it was as if i was directed to this page by God todayto cheer my dull mood.....
and while i was going through it, i could feel the passion and the depth and true love....and could see my own story in this poem
when it did end, i was disappointed, i wished that it should go on and on and on....like the carefree river , like the lovely breeze of positivity which touches us and makes us feel so fresh......
u indeed are a sweet angel

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is really so deep.. yes you delved into the complexities of love that can make our world simple... you expressed in a magnificent manner as you detailed all those defining moments big and small that mean the most.

[Lauren Beth]

I really enjoyed this piece and it is something I can really relate to...like you plucked the thoughts right from my head. You express these complex emotions beautifully, well done. And I love the closing line.

[Stephanie]

Cute title hun. I was like... "Oooh Intrigue!" Anyways, this was really adorable and precious. It's amazing how the smallest things that person does makes us the happiest in the world! I love you so much girl, and I love this poem. I got to see into your mind for a little while :]


Love youu!
xoxo