My Gospel

A spirtual prayer

My Gospel

I know that you will never leave me

I know I can count on you every morning at the dawn of every day

never do i feel alone for u are a constant in my presence

all I need is you

no other one can do the things you do

perform miracles beyond our wildest dreams

the essence of your being is bigger than 

our comprehension

I give myself to you

you are my master

creator of all

never can I doubt you

Lord you lifted me beyond

you have given from above

and because I know

you have raised him

I continue

to let you raise me up

when I'm  down 

I know it’s a temporary state

because your loving nature

and mercy and grace

delivers me every time

so I thank you for life

I thank you for being my friend

and thank you for the joy and blessings

within

my soul is content when I'm in your house 

your spirit speaks to mine

and I feel so close

so please continue to watch over me and my family 

and bless them with abundance

of faith and hope

cause I know I'm happy 

as long as I have you

Thank you Lord

Jazzmene Lynch

Reviews

[lilstar]

I enjoyed your poem a lot, and especially because I love the subject matter. I think maybe you could try breaking the lines up into stanzas. I believe this would be more appealing on the page while reading. You could also try making the lines a bit longer instead of cutting them so short. Wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing it :-)

[softlyspoken]

thank you i appreciate your review.

[Sir Tudor Bond]

very pure and different,despite the lack of rhyme scheme its a good poem , I think its fine very good job !!

[Skalved]

Hello.

You write with a lot of conviction, it really shows that the words you write are deeply felt by you, and that has an effect on the reader as well, even though the reader may not be spiritually inclined.

A very positive and hope filled piece of writing, clearly expressed, and each line flows well to the next.

kind regards
Skalved

[softlyspoken]

Thank you so much I appreciate you taking your time to review.

[Stefanie Holmes]

This is an inspirational poem. It really put a smile on my heart as I was reading it.

"and because I know
you risen him" I believe you want the word 'risen' to be 'raised' in this line to be grammatically correct.

Thank you for writing this beautiful piece.

~Stefanie

[softlyspoken]

Thanks you for you review I appreciate it