The Winter of My Dreams

A wish I have,

A wish I seek,

to experience the winter,

the winter of my dreams.

To stay at a ski resort,

to snowboard and play,

in the freshly fallen snow,

all night and all day.

To walk through a snowy forest,

as quiet as can be,

sitting in the silence,

and even start to sing.

To skate around a rink or pond,

to sled down a hill,

don't care if I crash or fall,

not me who pays the bill.

To swim in a hot tub,

to drink some hot cocoa,

to wrap myself in blankets,

to watch the falling snow.

Who knows when the winter,

the winter of my dreams,

will ever come to life,

will ever come to me...

Reviews

[AliceBarnes]

This was a lovely little poem. The length I thought was spot on and I really enjoyed the poem. I love hot chocolate and this poem brings back memories from when I was younger in the winter, so I really loved that. I can't spot any mistakes and this really looks professional, like that of a published poet. I don't know if you have thought about it, but you should try and get some of your poems published as the ones you share on here are always so good! I loved this poem it was short but sweet with just the right amount of verses. I must ask, is this based on your own hopes and dreams? Or is this just a poem that you felt like writing? Either way I felt it was well written and an enjoyable read.

[jaywolf1738]

This poem was written based on my hopes and dreams. I don't get to experience things like in the poem. The only times I can experience it is in words. I hope on getting a chance when I get out of high school.