Yesterday

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Standing by crystalline waves I hear you call to me
Why are you so far away in an hour glass away from me
Dwelling on the grains of time washing away my sins
Don’t you see? don’t you see? no one ever really wins
The sparkling winds flow throughout my body
I will always want you back full heartedly

Reviews

[Chris]

...'til you find you don't...

Life has a way of happening to everyone else when we aren't near... friends become not-so-friendlike, family senses the differences and tries to understand... relationships shift and we - stare into the dark as we await sleep.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the honest tone in the words.
"Don’t you see? don’t you see? no one ever really wins "
I like the above lines. Realistic thoughts shared. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like this one.
Coyote