Water and Sand

A journey

On this night, so far away from home, From that peaceful place I chose to roam— I know you'll be there tomorrow A place to go, so far from pain and sorrow There’s so much here so much that I don’t understand About this ball of water and sand— The road of life has so much that it brings To the rich, the poor, the peasants, and kings Can you take me where I am meant to be? Where I can be free Somewhere far past the masks Where the hero basks To a place with no maze Far past bags and mental haze Oh, to sleep within an angel’s grip Would be a wondrous trip I know I would not slip Because of her grip And if it can’t be real it’s still worth dreaming

Reviews

[Lydia Wegner]

This poem reminds me of what I'd love to do with some man, someday. I also very much like these two lines:
Can you take me where I am meant to be?
Where I can be free ..

Very good job.

[Loribeth215]

great imagery... good use of symbolism. I like this a lot.