"When the sun hides".

Short poem.

A,
shadow,
is,
forever cast,
as,
I,
spend,
seasons,
in the night.
Never,
minded,
by,
high,
luminescence,
I,
must,
look,
from,
higher ground.
Surely,
a time,
when,
I'll,
have,
to avoid,
ultraviolet,
rays,
will,
arrive,
like,
a thief,
in the night,
to,
entrap me,
in,
an,
anxious drawl,
of,
radiosity.
Unable,
to,
avoid,
a,
steam,
I,
retreat,
to,
wise,
another day.

Reviews

[J. Roman Vega]

Beset,
of,
never ending will.
Patiently,
counting,
the moons.
Neglected,
by the sun's glory,
I,
necessitate,
deeper wisdom.
Indeed,
the era,
to hide from hostility,
is soon upon us.
Without warning,
To weave,
a tangled web,
brilliantly impulsive. Unfortunately ill mannered,
My white flag,
rises.
Only,
to go down,
once,
again.

Oh, if only to passively agress, with the patience of a minute hand. I would slowly release my fury, with a dark saying, similar to that of old. Where as, to be intelligently understood, literally creating the mold.

[emmajoy]

A chain of words, not so short.. falling on minds resting, wondering thought in the mulling of luminescence. Too low, unclear perhaps, too high.. who knows.

'.. will, arrive, like, a thief, in the night, to, entrap me, in, an, anxious drawl,'